Revised:2 Captains and a Chick

So I revised [link] to try and do different stuff my professor and I talked about. I made Evangeline have more frills, made Captain Moorcock more Naval captain-like (or I just revised the shoulder things lol) and took away the boot covers because he was looking a little to much like something else.

Feel free to compare and contrast. I can't decide which version of what I like better.